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Come Ridiculously Catch by ~saturnineguise:iconsaturnineguise:



The leaves don’t scare me
I’m not afraid of the falling
Only of the impact


They crumple steady
Kissing the floor
On silent edges


They feather inward
Shaking to their veins
Retract in gentle breeze


Come and catch them
Ridiculously like misers
Catch them with me
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like crazed pensioners.
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*Awesomelylostfishies:iconAwesomelylostfishies: May 16, 2008, 4:53:18 PM
you should stop being amazing, it makes me look really bad

:heart:

--
i live a masquerade.
black masks and black nights.
my dreams are glitter and gold.
what a world.
what a life
to live behind a mask.
*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: May 16, 2008, 10:19:12 PM
love the second stanza

nice work

xo!

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interested in collaborating?
writer, photographer, painter, whatever(er) -
I'll mix with words with anything you've got.
~ladysynaesthesia:iconladysynaesthesia: May 16, 2008, 11:18:30 PM
:love:

I don't have anything 'witty' to say but
could not catch them and I could not catch you.
hiding below my shadow yet dancing above my fears
I grip sorrow's edge as you crumble to fall at my soul's tears
[I have not forgotten you]
but sometimes I can't help feeling numb through and through
closed hands on open arms hold nothing.


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haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
refrigerator
~starsdie:iconstarsdie: May 17, 2008, 4:33:36 AM
soft (: very nice
~cynicalxpoet:iconcynicalxpoet: May 31, 2008, 9:28:31 AM
This is beautiful.

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(i'm hiding in
parenthesis- don't look. this is
what you skip over
because everything important
is around
the borders of here)