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The way you scuff your feet. The way you pick the roses past their bloom, so you can jingle shake their petals as you walk, without a bride. The way you haven’t brushed your hair since you were ten. The way you’re comfortable with taking turns in dialogue. Your pauses of breath. Your silver step. The way you croak good morning in the lazy afternoons. The way you only like your yolks runny. Your meat soft. Your bread hard. The way you fill the cup with too much hot water. The way you let things steam until we’re blind, with something not unlike tears. Your apologetic ‘no’s. The freedom in your ‘hello’s. Those jeans you never wore. The picture in my head of your fingers, your thumbs, the backs of your knees. The smile you wore as a badge whenever I was leaving. The way your face becomes the same blur as I swing you into dizziness. Your look of disdain when you’ve realized I’ve written the day away.

Love is a lot like hate.
Title: I Love (Hate)

Blast the inability of brackets in titles.



A streaming from a prompt. I love stimulus writing.
But this one isn't particularly love-worthy.

Anyhow, this is for this =VisualLit --an interesting new project.

Stimulus photography by =SilverBee Over the Rainbow
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noiamnot Featured By Owner May 6, 2007
Love the photo. Suits, too.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner May 6, 2007
=D thank you dear.
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s4br1n4 Featured By Owner May 4, 2007
I like this. alots =)
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner May 6, 2007
thank you very much. a lots. =D
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RedWombat Featured By Owner May 1, 2007
Gorgeous, in a way hard to explain. It is so human that it almost sings. Makes me think about my own relationships.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner May 1, 2007
Thank you gorgeousness. Creating pleasant ideals, or unideals, is somewhat gratifying. =)
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RedWombat Featured By Owner May 1, 2007
Ah, indeed. But I love that style of description, it seems to encompass more than it states. If that makes sense.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner May 1, 2007
It does and I know how you mean, and I love that style also, to read of others, and to write. =)
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SilverBee Featured By Owner May 1, 2007
I really enjoyed this! :D
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner May 1, 2007
Thank you for the bobbing eyebrows and the favourite! =D
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