literature

hair-line fracture

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i am frugal with my wrists
i won't let them see you, enough
now, i'll say, and push them back
into my sleeves, hurriedly

like they could really catch
a cold from your eyes. your
two glaciers of disinterest, kind
of sparked your curiosity

did i? my wrists, they creak
like old willows breaking in
the wind, hunching from the knot
along their side, heavy with

finger branches, soft keratin
leaves you can rip out sometimes
after it rains heavy like
the storm i slept through last

night, and you told me there
was hail, and howling and i
did not believe you until i asked
other people. why is

that? how i don't believe
in storms. how i don't believe
my wrists could hold out under
the pressure of a watch even

though i used to wear three,
and tell them all to guess which
one worked. least of all, i know
my wrists aren't broken.
i was originally going to have that last word as yours. but it now isn't.



A stress fracture is one type of incomplete fracture in bones.

It could be described as a very small sliver or crack in the bone; this is why it is sometimes dubbed "hair-line fracture".
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This gave me chills! The imagery is so.. Filling. I read it twice and both times I was thrilled! ^_^