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how come perfection could be the smile of apology you made when you were always late

how come perfection could be
                                  could be
                                        would be
                                               cant be
                                                          was?
                                                          was.
                                                          wasnt.
                                                          was it?

   ricocheting back
          and forth
  velocity isnt lost each time
       the bounce has changed
   direction

          there arent enough sides inside
                my skull to play any proper games

        how come perfection is this perfect good bye
     splitting my sides
undoing
undone
   making me up from memory

       how come perfection is not me you
you me
       how come perfection isnt coming
                                                   going
       how come perfection is this goodbye

       how come perfection is all of these perfect lies

  how come
  how come

                                          how come its all so perfect.
perfect.

"ill live through you and make you what i never was if youre the best then maybe so am i compared to him compared to her im doing this for your own damned good youll make up for what i blew whats the problem why are you crying?"

random lyrics always bunch up in my head.

what is this, what is perfection?

a perfect head hold. a perfect encasement.

a box to place my weary head,
a box is all thats left,
a box is where my heart is
what my heart is
an empty box, left on a forgotten shelf.


drip all of my words someplace else.
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LoveShotEyes Featured By Owner May 15, 2007  Student Writer
I love that song.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner May 15, 2007
=D me too :hug:
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kittytsukasa Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2007  Student
I believe perfection is something we create ourselves.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2007
I don't believe in perfection, and yet i do, and i dont. =)
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:iconkittytsukasa:
kittytsukasa Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2007  Student
Hmmm, I believe in coming as close to perfection as possible. It's a character flaw I'm told.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2007
haha i dont believe in anything =)
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phreakyone Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2007
i like
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2007
thank you =)
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Forbsie Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
I love the way it makes me think. If that makes any sense at all. :dygel: Anyway, I like it.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2007
heh thank you very much, and for the odd looking emoticon =D
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