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we taught our grace
to fly, and it taught
us to stay
tethered to our dreams

in a frightful way

like leaves do to branches
(only leave when they/you need to die)


i can keep calm, i can keep, i can, i
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Bogbrush Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
Very nicely done!
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
haha that link is hilarious!
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Bogbrush Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2008
It made me laugh when I first read it :)
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2008
truffles should be handled inappropriately in my opinion.

little balls pulled out of the dirt.
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Bogbrush Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2008
They should be hunted down with pigs :)
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2008
haha yes, and you should nearly have your hand bitten off trying to fight the pig for it. Pigs are more equal than dogs, surely.
(;
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
thanks so much!
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blacktutu Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2008   Writer
Beautiful, and stunning. Your words always fit together so well.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
thank you, as ever, darling (:
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Nefex Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2008
hope you're okay ): great poem though <3
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
thanks, i am okay (:
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Nefex Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2008
that's good <3
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2008
:heart:
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mesmeric-revelation Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2008
oh spork you are so brilliant...:heart:
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
and we shall take over the world with a giant flaming spork!

:heart:
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mesmeric-revelation Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
SHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

*sporks you in the face*
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2008
:ohnoes: am i bleeding now?
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mesmeric-revelation Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2008
No! Twas a....love spork! :giggle:
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2008
hehe oh yeah?

...a love spork huh? hehehe a big jab...

:giggle:
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IAmPhoenixMoth Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
how you echo my head.
or my head echoes you.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
(:
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FictionalSoul Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2008  Student General Artist
very meaningful, reminiscent of nature and human flaws at the same time. =) love it.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
sometimes we tend to think we are apart from nature. which is ridiculous, really

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FictionalSoul Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008  Student General Artist
wow. that is very true. I think society tends to pull us away from our roots. :nod:
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2008
hehe yes, we're all animals
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FictionalSoul Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2008  Student General Artist
^^; that is true.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2008
hehee :heart:
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neon247 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2008
Wow...

So much power in so few words.

A really amazing piece.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
thank you so much :heart:
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katepowellshine Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2008
you okay?
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
i am, thank you (:
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DarlingDante Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2008
Excellent snapshot.
I once wrote a haiku with a similar message.

[link]
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
thank you, and lovely haiku (:
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I love your writing
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
:heart:
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livingcomforteagle Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2008
i missed your poetry
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2008
wow, thank you so much darling :hug:
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