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he said,

"

you taste kind of nice
ill give you a try.


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i said,

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its been too long
i know ive forgotten.


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he said,

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its just like riding a bike


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i said,

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i always used to crash


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this isn't about sex.
heh i liked the first line. this amuses me, thats about all it does.
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:iconsumarlegur:
sumarlegur Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Interesting ending, abrupt and to the point.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2007
Thank you very much =)
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kittytsukasa Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007  Student
I like the use of comparison to the bike.
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:iconsaturnineguise:
saturnineguise Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2007
=) thanks
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persistanceofmemory Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2007
I laughed out loud.

Well done.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2007
=D heh thank you !
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Nightgazer27913 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2007
you lost me then....what is it about?
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:iconsaturnineguise:
saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2007
heh. life. everything. trying.
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darnthisanarch Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007   Writer
"i always used to crash"

Made me smile from ear to ear.
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:iconsaturnineguise:
saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
That's a lovely reaction. Thank you very much! =)
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saiyuu182 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
Didn't thought about sex either (probably since I was part of a dialogue almost exactly like that and it wasn't about it) ;P
I love it :D
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:iconsaturnineguise:
saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
thank you so much! heh i live your avatar, its cute and chubby like. =D

thanks for the favourite!
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saiyuu182 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
Yeah bashing bunny is adorably desperate :D
No problem at all, your work is great :love:
Loved Puerile Pt.13 too, just like the first commenter on that, it's captivating!
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
thank you very much ! =D im glad you are captivated =)
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lacerated-star Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Cor.
Nice.
Love how you've set it out. =D
*raises hand*
I swear I didn't think about sex. Seriously =]
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
blimey!

*ahem sure....sure you didnt.=p hehe

thanks loveliness!
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lacerated-star Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Gheheh ^^;
:heart: English slang =]
Yeah, you've got me.. I did ^^;
You're welcome =D
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2007
hahaha =D
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lacerated-star Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
=]
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:iconsaturnineguise:
saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2007
=)
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:iconsedimentary:
sedimentary Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
heh! me too.
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:iconsaturnineguise:
saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
youre tasty?
ive tried beard before...
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:iconsedimentary:
sedimentary Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
like pubes, only different.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2007
hahahha

of course you chose to reply to this one.
yes, different.
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:iconenchanted-lullaby:
enchanted-lullaby Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
tasty!
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:iconenchanted-lullaby:
enchanted-lullaby Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
like sugar!
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
heheheh =) thank ye!
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
like monkey?

=)
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ElectroBaby Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2007
nice!!!
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
thanks mist-eh, and for the favourite!
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BubbleRoseyPosey Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2007
I don't know what it's about! I love the way you formatted it, though. I feel that way, too. People say, "Oh, this is going to be so easy" but I always think about how many easy things I've failed at. Lol! Anyway, I really like it. It's very short and to the point.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
thank you very much, and oh how i know about the easy things, perspective is such a vile little creature =)
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BubbleRoseyPosey Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
You're welcome. ^_^
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
=)
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