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he said,

"

you taste kind of nice
ill give you a try.


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i said,

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its been too long
i know ive forgotten.


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he said,

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its just like riding a bike


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i said,

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i always used to crash


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this isn't about sex.
heh i liked the first line. this amuses me, thats about all it does.
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:iconsumarlegur:
sumarlegur Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Interesting ending, abrupt and to the point.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2007
Thank you very much =)
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kittytsukasa Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2007  Student
I like the use of comparison to the bike.
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:iconsaturnineguise:
saturnineguise Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2007
=) thanks
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:iconpersistanceofmemory:
persistanceofmemory Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2007
I laughed out loud.

Well done.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2007
=D heh thank you !
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Nightgazer27913 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2007
you lost me then....what is it about?
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:iconsaturnineguise:
saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2007
heh. life. everything. trying.
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darnthisanarch Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007   Writer
"i always used to crash"

Made me smile from ear to ear.
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:iconsaturnineguise:
saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2007
That's a lovely reaction. Thank you very much! =)
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