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How can you manufacture emotion?


You can't.

Such a bold statement. Look capital letter. Punctuation.

Must be true.

[i smile everyday for you, it kills me, every day, just a little bit more of me, falls to the floor, and i step on it]
Bad title, but it means, force for.
Always, always, when you smile, when you laugh, you don't get all those annoying questions, those seemingly concerned looks, those you know, 'I understands' those, 'whats wrongs'.
Smile. Laugh. A better picture of distress.
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unexplored-beauty Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2007
love that last line. it's gold to me. -erin
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2007
Thank you Erin =D
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Raistlindantilus Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2007   Writer
This is amazing. Simple as that.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2007
Thank you very extremely muchly much =D
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noiamnot Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2007
And the good thing, but also the sad thing, is that I'd grind all the fallen pieces six feet down, just so he didn't feel obligated to pick them up.
But I'd never tell him that.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2007
I know exactly what you mean.
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noiamnot Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2007
Ah, love, how sweet thy poison...
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2007
how delectable to fall.
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noiamnot Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2007
Agreed :)
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2007
=)
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noiamnot Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2007
"Always, always, when you smile, when you laugh, you don't get all those annoying questions, those seemingly concerned looks, those you know, 'I understands' those, 'whats wrongs'.
Smile. Laugh. A better picture of distress. "

I know. So well. I've elevated it to an art form and I'm sure I'll be getting an award soon :)
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2007
I'm so good at it, it's the person I am to everyone. My guise.
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Loveyoutoo Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2007
I gave up longgg time ago on pretending to be happy on days I'm not..
So I act pissy,then people get offended.
It's a horrible cycle...
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2007
it isn't days, dear. =)
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sedimentary Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2007
you need a break.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2007
i need a shotgun.
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sedimentary Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2007
messy
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2007
a cliff?
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sedimentary Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2007
not certain.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2007
i mean a really tall cliff.
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sedimentary Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2007
haha. did you draw it with your pencils?
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2007
that dab of lavender really does it.
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wildmonky Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2007  Student Writer
i like the depth of this.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2007
=) thank you.
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