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it is a gentle pity

that i will never know you,
and you will never know me
and there are so many of you, that i could have known, could have loved, could have laughed with

where are you?

which corners are you stuck in, sticky, your feet are too sticky

jump around, why don't you?



(longitude, latitude)
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:iconhoney-spider:
honey-spider Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2008
i am here!
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2008
i am here, sometimes, perhaps it is that i am always here, but i'm just not aware of it (;
:heart:
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YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008   Writer
pretty

xo!
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2008
thank you very much! (:
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starsdie Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008
indeed

.love the simplicity
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2008
thank you (:
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Inallgoodtime Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2008
I think there is more to the whole mess than knowing the other person. I don't think I'd even try to 'know' someone. To know what they want and like maybe, but not them as in themselves, surely not that! That's what usually drives me away in the first place. But I'm a flighty raccoon of a man, not the rhinoceros that sits in a swamp of yesterday's heat.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2008
hehe flighty raccoon of a man is such a lovely way to be described i should think - far better than a creature that basks in humid filth. perhaps it is that we can only ever know other people, far more than we know ourselves, and in knowing them come to a quiet understanding of what we are. but in saying that, i still don't believe we can truly know other people, let alone ourselves. so i've talked myself around in a circle. grand.
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Inallgoodtime Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2008
Well if your only representation of what a person is comes from inside you - as in yourself - and you don't understand yourself (which I feel is an accurate thing to say about anyone to some degree) than how can you presume to know anyone outside you?

Maybe the raccoon is swift and pretty, but the rhino is fat warm and happy.
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mesmeric-revelation Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2007
beautiful simplicity :spork:
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:iconsaturnineguise:
saturnineguise Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2007
beautiful spork (is you, is you)
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IAmPhoenixMoth Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2007
Horrible, how true some things are
do you die for everyone you never know
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2007
i die for everyone and no one, daily.
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Interpolny Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2007
how I know what you mean, great piece :)
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2007
thank you so much (:
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Riyllan Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2007   Writer
:clap: :rose:
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2007
thank you so much (:
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enchanted-lullaby Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2007
sticky cake fingers. all mucked up in love.
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:iconsaturnineguise:
saturnineguise Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2007
i would love to make a cake with you honey-heart.

:heart:
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FictionalSoul Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2007  Student General Artist
sometimes it only takes a few words to say what must be said. beautifully done :heart:
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2007
thank you :heart:
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redcrake Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2007   Writer
very nice, making your point in so few lines is impressive.
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saturnineguise Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2007
thank you so much. (: it's a thought that i always tend to get stuck on
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redcrake Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2007   Writer
I know what you mean :)
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